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Holistic review and what “well-rounded” really means

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Brinda Ambal
If you find something that truly speaks to you, that’s one thing, but don’t sacrifice the ability to explore in high school for a marginal benefit to your college application… you’re still a teenager.

At highly-selective institutions, the amount of qualified applicants far exceeds the number of available spots. The question then becomes how admissions offices should resolve this quandary. Rank students based on their grades and test scores? Part of the dilemma, however, is that tons of kids have great stats. Besides, this approach would neglect the many ways students can — and do — contribute to their community beyond academic achievements.

Enter the concept of holistic review, the practice that dominates elite college admissions. Schools that employ a holistic admissions process consider a variety of factors such as extracurricular activities, essays, interviews and letters of recommendation in addition to your transcript and test scores. As such, you’ve probably heard that top-tier colleges look for “well-rounded” applicants. This is true to an extent; good grades and an otherwise barren application aren’t going to get you into the Ivy League. Thus, many high schoolers join a random array of clubs, for example, to prove they are multitalented candidates. But what schools are really looking to create is a well-rounded freshman class. Imagine a college campus where every student was an engineering major, each one from a similar background with a similar personality and holding similar beliefs. That would be a pretty fruitless learning environment.

Pretend that you’re a member of an admissions committee. Applicants A and B both applied to your school to study political science, and both have impressive grades and test scores. Applicant A is involved in every club under the sun. To their credit, they picked up a fair share of accolades and leadership titles along the way, but their application as a whole is a bit scattershot. If I asked you to explain what gets Applicant A out of bed every morning, you’d probably struggle to give me a cohesive answer. Applicant B, on the other hand, is captain of the debate team, volunteered for several political campaigns and helped organize a large student protest. Their personal essay discusses how they developed a more nuanced view of oppression in their community, while their letters of recommendation praise Applicant B for being a helpful, compassionate classmate. Both students might have an equally outstanding list of accomplishments, but the “story” that Applicant B tells is much more compelling. You have a better understanding of who they are and what they would bring to your college. Their application isn’t a perfectly round circle; it has a clear “spike,” which will likely give them the upper hand.

High school is a time for you to learn about yourself and what intrigues, interests and excites you. Don’t box yourself in, thinking that there are only a few things you should be doing.

— Carolyn Allison Caplan

Chuck Hughes, a former senior admissions officer at Harvard, authored a book entitled “What It Really Takes to Get Into Ivy League and Other Highly Selective Colleges.” He remarked that he “preferred reading about more substantive activities in fewer areas of interest than seeing a list of activities that screamed ‘Jack of all trades, master of none.’” Similarly, an aspiring history major that takes AP European History is going to craft a more airtight narrative than someone who fills that schedule slot with a second science course to appear well-rounded.

I’d argue this is a reflection of us living in an increasingly specialized world. That said, I think this reality can be met with either a healthy or unhealthy response. The unhealthy response is to put all your eggs into one basket by sophomore year in hopes of cultivating the largest spike possible. If you find something that truly speaks to you, that’s one thing, but don’t sacrifice the ability to explore in high school for a marginal benefit to your college application. I’d hate for you to be the dissatisfied chemist that could have been a great journalist if not for the fact you hyper-committed to a specific field. The healthy response is to realize that you’re still a teenager. No reasonable person — admissions officers included — is expecting you to have your entire life trajectory mapped out by your 17th birthday. After all, colleges know that the vast majority of students will eventually switch their major anyways.

So what does all of this mean with regards to holistic review? It means you should use the various components of your application to tell a story about yourself and the impact you hope to make at college and beyond. If you have a multitude of interests, use your application to highlight your intellectual curiosity and genuine love of learning. Or if you’re like Applicant B from my earlier example, play up the depth of your more narrowly-defined pursuits. What doesn’t make for a good story is stretching yourself a mile wide, but going just an inch deep in the name of a well-rounded facade.

In the next section, we’ll take a closer look at the ratings system that many admissions offices use to evaluate applicants. For now, though, I want to leave you with an excerpt from college admissions consultant Carolyn Allison Caplan’s book, “Hey AdmissionsMom: Real Talk from Reddit.”

“High school is a time for you to learn about yourself and what intrigues, interests and excites you. Don’t box yourself in, thinking that there are only a few things you should be doing. As such — and I acknowledge I’m going against the grain here — my philosophy for helping kids with extracurriculars is all about being star-shaped. I don’t actually recommend having one big ‘spike,’ meaning a single extracurricular you devote all your time to, though I recognize that’s the trendy advice these days, nor do I recommend trying to pursue every single extracurricular you can because you feel like you need to check off a laundry list of activities for the ‘resume booster club’ so you can be ‘well-rounded.’ Instead, shoot for being kinda well-rounded with some spikes — like a star — by pursuing four or five activities that interest and excite you. But honestly, you do you. Be who you are. That’s what colleges want. And if being you means having one big spike or being a perfectly round ball, then that’s totally fine.”

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Tyler Kinzy, Managing Editor-in-Chief
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Pronouns: she/her I am a senior, and this is my fourth year on staff. The Pathfinder has helped me push myself independently, build a supportive community and grow through my mistakes. Though I write a lot of opinions, I do seek to understand the other side— my newfound knowledge always either strengthens my own position or changes my mind.  I love fairy princess tea parties with my friends and 12-hour study marathons. In the rest of my time, I am Student Body co-Vice President, a part of the Scholar Bowl team and often found on or around Creve Coeur Lake with St. Louis Rowing Club. I most enjoy the small moments; a friend’s laugh, the brush of my fingers against a piece of paper and the first glimpse of daffodil yellow after a really long winter (gotta love Missouri weather).
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